Fix grammar in monika_attractiveness

Monika After Story/game/script-topics.rpy

@@ -9511,14 +9511,14 @@ label monika_attractiveness:
         m 4eud "I know I don't really need to, but I still try to eat right, get enough exercise, and keep myself clean...among other things."
 
         if mas_isMoniEnamored(higher=True):
-            $ first_line_var = "when"
+            $ first_line_var = " when"
             $ second_line_end = "whenever it'll happen"
 
         else:
-            $ first_line_var = "maybe"
-            $ second_line_end = "if it'll ever happen"
+            $ first_line_var = ", maybe"
+            $ second_line_end = "if it ever happens"
 
-        m 4eub "It simply feels satisfying to keep good habits like that, and besides, who knows [first_line_var] I'll be able to cross over into your reality and have a normal body like you."
+        m 4eub "It simply feels satisfying to keep good habits like that, and besides, who knows[first_line_var] I'll be able to cross over into your reality and have a normal body like you."
         m 1hua "It won't hurt to make sure I'll be ready for that transition [second_line_end]."
         m 1eua "You don't have to worry though, [player]."
         show monika 5eua at t11 zorder MAS_MONIKA_Z with dissolve_monika