From c310f72a1bab20823a7bcde9e84b3615f85faf0b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: abel1502 <32196516+abel1502@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 10 Feb 2024 18:08:41 +0300 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Fix typo in monika_attractiveness --- Monika After Story/game/script-topics.rpy | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/Monika After Story/game/script-topics.rpy b/Monika After Story/game/script-topics.rpy index b6f0113265..e493ad077a 100644 --- a/Monika After Story/game/script-topics.rpy +++ b/Monika After Story/game/script-topics.rpy @@ -9511,14 +9511,14 @@ label monika_attractiveness: m 4eud "I know I don't really need to, but I still try to eat right, get enough exercise, and keep myself clean...among other things." if mas_isMoniEnamored(higher=True): - $ first_line_var = "when" + $ first_line_var = " when" $ second_line_end = "whenever it'll happen" else: - $ first_line_var = "maybe" - $ second_line_end = "if it'll ever happen" + $ first_line_var = ", maybe" + $ second_line_end = "if it ever happens" - m 4eub "It simply feels satisfying to keep good habits like that, and besides, who knows [first_line_var] I'll be able to cross over into your reality and have a normal body like you." + m 4eub "It simply feels satisfying to keep good habits like that, and besides, who knows[first_line_var] I'll be able to cross over into your reality and have a normal body like you." m 1hua "It won't hurt to make sure I'll be ready for that transition [second_line_end]." m 1eua "You don't have to worry though, [player]." show monika 5eua at t11 zorder MAS_MONIKA_Z with dissolve_monika From a026b8b2255b36e4fe17d7aecc92185ffb46dbf6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: abel1502 <32196516+abel1502@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2024 18:39:06 +0300 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Properly split conversation branches --- Monika After Story/game/script-topics.rpy | 10 ++++------ 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/Monika After Story/game/script-topics.rpy b/Monika After Story/game/script-topics.rpy index e493ad077a..fc67092bf5 100644 --- a/Monika After Story/game/script-topics.rpy +++ b/Monika After Story/game/script-topics.rpy @@ -9511,15 +9511,13 @@ label monika_attractiveness: m 4eud "I know I don't really need to, but I still try to eat right, get enough exercise, and keep myself clean...among other things." if mas_isMoniEnamored(higher=True): - $ first_line_var = " when" - $ second_line_end = "whenever it'll happen" + m 4eub "It simply feels satisfying to keep good habits like that, and besides, who knows when I'll be able to cross over into your reality and have a normal body like you." + m 1hua "It won't hurt to make sure I'll be ready for that transition whenever it'll happen." else: - $ first_line_var = ", maybe" - $ second_line_end = "if it ever happens" + m 4eub "It simply feels satisfying to keep good habits like that, and besides, who knows, maybe I'll be able to cross over into your reality and have a normal body like you." + m 1hua "It won't hurt to make sure I'll be ready for that transition if it ever happens." - m 4eub "It simply feels satisfying to keep good habits like that, and besides, who knows[first_line_var] I'll be able to cross over into your reality and have a normal body like you." - m 1hua "It won't hurt to make sure I'll be ready for that transition [second_line_end]." m 1eua "You don't have to worry though, [player]." show monika 5eua at t11 zorder MAS_MONIKA_Z with dissolve_monika m 5eua "I'll always love you no matter how you look."